Seth…one of our rough drafts

I realized after posting my key word outline of Seth that I duplicated one of the photos.  Hope to fix that when I can get to my photos.  Sorry!!!

Rough Draft with emphasis on rough so you get the idea of where you start and where you end:

I.  Intro:  (yet to be completed)

II  My friend Seth has a great personality and is hilarious.  He is kind, fun loving and does not argue, hit and is just plain nice.  His family are Christians and have the same family values as ours.  We enjoy spending time together.  He makes us laugh until our stomachs hurt and he makes great movies.  I think he might be a producer one day.  Seth, well, he’s pretty awesome and we love him like he loves us.  Our friendship has continued since I was 6 years old.  As you can see Seth’s personality is wonderful!

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III.  Overnighting is so much fun.  So Seth is a pretty awesome guy to have sleep over at our house.  My brothers stay up all night with Seth.  My youngest brother and Seth usually sleep in the den on the couch.  We also like to play a game we invented called The Scare Game.  Junk food is one of the things we like to eat during our overnighters.  We rejoice when spending time with Seth.  This is why we like overnighters with Seth so much.

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IV.  We definitely have several favorite things to do with Seth.  The scare game is a game we play with all the lights off  in the basement of our house.  Someone is chosen as “it”.  Then we basically run and scream and scream.  It drives my mom nuts.  We also have wars with our Nerf swords, go on field trips together and swim at his house because he has a pool.  We also play laser tag at night.  These are some of our favorite things to do.

V.  Conclusion (yet to be written)

So…. from here we will reword, remove any banned words, add quality adjectives, varying sentence openers, strong verbs and write both an introduction and a conclusion.  I hope to have the final papers up next week.  See you then.